Bill Evans
Jul 4, 2021

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"The carpets must be so silky she thought and removed her shoes. "

From the first reading, what I saw was: "The carpets must be so silky--she thought and removed her shoes. " instead of "The carpets must be so silky, she thought--and removed her shoes."

Commas and em-dashes are useful little things.

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Bill Evans
Bill Evans

Written by Bill Evans

A practicing writer and architect, he is now squandering hours making a mess from writing.

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